Re: FN-FORUM killer web site

date posted 6th September 2000 12:41

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Peter
Not quite a killer! See errors listed below:

Web design page
1) Line 2: "for you web site" - I suggest "for your web site".
2) Line 4: "We can provide e-commmerce" - last word should read =
"e-commerce".

Solutions page
3) Line 9: "endeavor" - Are you deliberately using American spelling? =
If not, it should read "endeavour".

Contact page
4) Lines 1-2: "You can contact us in any of any of the following ways" =
- I suggest "You can contact us in any of the following ways".

I've only briefly looked at these three pages.

John Brunsdon (Internet Copy-editor and Proofreader)

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From: Peter McCormack [EMAIL REMOVED]
To: [EMAIL REMOVED]
Sent: Tuesday, September 05, 2000 4:34 PM
Subject: Re: FN-FORUM killer web site


> Want a killer site, visit mine - www.e-sume.co.uk and then I come back =
to me
> Peter McCormack
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> From: Matt Russell [EMAIL REMOVED]
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> Sent: Tuesday, September 05, 2000 4:14 PM
> Subject: Re: FN-FORUM killer web site
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> > visit www.hornetinternet.com - we will design the site for you at a =
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> > fee, of course...
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: kif [EMAIL REMOVED]
> > To: [EMAIL REMOVED]
> > Sent: Tuesday, September 05, 2000 3:36 PM
> > Subject: FN-FORUM killer web site
> >
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> > > Hi chaps and chapesses
> > >
> > > Would someone please let me know how to make a killler website =
that will
> > > sell for a least a million quid.
> > > I would like to get it finished and sold by next week
> > > All help would be appreciated
> > >
> > > Cheers
> > >
> > > Kif
> > >
> > >
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> > > * Free listing for freelancers
> > > * Free to advertise jobs
> > > * Free jobs distribution service
> > > * Free database of 1000 freelancers
> > >
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> * Free to advertise jobs
> * Free jobs distribution service
> * Free database of 1000 freelancers
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Peter
Not quite a killer!  See errors =
listed=20
below:
 
Web design =
page
1)  Line 2: "for you web =
site"  – I=20
suggest "for your web site".
2)  Line 4: "We can provide =
e-commmerce" –=20
last word should read "e-commerce".
 
Solutions =
page
3)  Line 9: "endeavor" – Are =
you deliberately=20
using American spelling?  If not, it should read =
"endeavour".
 
Contact =
page
4)  Lines 1–2: "You can =
contact us in any of=20
any of the following ways" – I suggest "You can contact us in any =
of the=20
following ways".
 
I've only briefly looked at these three =

pages.
 

John Brunsdon (Internet Copy-editor and =

Proofreader)
 
----- Original Message -----
From: Peter McCormack <