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RE: FN-FORUM Simple 3 page site check.
date posted 9th September 2001 13:09
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Nice clean design. Not overdone with graphics. Quick to load on 56K dial
up. Text scales well on smaller screen sizes.
Slight grammar correction
'I believe that as we move into a new century, the role that tourism plays
in conserving Africa's remaining wildlife and natural habitats is
considerable.'
Should this read '...and natural habitats are...'
And
'Ecology of Tanzania: Due to its geographical position, Tanzania is the
southern most limit for many northern '
Should this be '...southern most limits...'
and
'As you can imagine, all of these areas have their endemic and restricted
range species of plants, mammals, birds and with a bird list of 1,112
species, Tanzania is second only to the Congo in Africa.
Should this be '...mammals and birds. With a bird list...'
Overall very nice design, ideal for the subject matter. Looking forward to
seeing the rest
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Subject: FN-FORUM Simple 3 page site check.
Hi guys,
been out of the scene for a while due to personal probs...divorce etc
Wondered if anyone could comment on my first site for a while.
I'ts only small but the client wishes to add a lot more such as a
wildlife image library at a later stage etc.
The url is http://www.marcbaker-expeditions.com
Regards,
Gary.
http://www.moonfizz.com
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considerable.'
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this read '...and natural habitats=20
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And
'Ecology=20
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limit for many northern =
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Should=20
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limits...'
and
'As you can imagine, all of these areas have their =
endemic and=20
restricted range species of plants, mammals, birds and with a bird list =
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species, Tanzania is second only to the Congo in=20
Africa.
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this be '...mammals and birds. With a bird=20
list...'
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only small but the client wishes to add a lot more such as a =
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http://www.moonfizz.com
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