Re: FN-FORUM Simple 3 page site check.

date posted 9th September 2001 13:32

> Slight grammar correction
> 'I believe that as we move into a new century, the role that tourism plays
> in conserving Africa's remaining wildlife and natural habitats is
> considerable.'
> Should this read '...and natural habitats are...'

'fraid not Peter, it's the singular 'tourism' which dictates the 'is' - i.e.
the role that tourism plays is considerable.'

>
> 'Ecology of Tanzania: Due to its geographical position, Tanzania is the
> southern most limit for many northern '
>
> Should this be '...southern most limits...'

'fraid not again! Yes I've taken my pedantry pill today, but if I didn't
point this out I'm sure Kathy would have done ;-)
Your point about porn sites is well made, however.

Cheers, Paul.


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> Nice clean design. Not overdone with graphics. Quick to load on 56K dial
> up. Text scales well on smaller screen sizes.
>
> Slight grammar correction
> 'I believe that as we move into a new century, the role that tourism plays
> in conserving Africa's remaining wildlife and natural habitats is
> considerable.'
> Should this read '...and natural habitats are...'
>
> And
>
> 'Ecology of Tanzania: Due to its geographical position, Tanzania is the
> southern most limit for many northern '
>
> Should this be '...southern most limits...'
>
> and
> 'As you can imagine, all of these areas have their endemic and restricted
> range species of plants, mammals, birds and with a bird list of 1,112
> species, Tanzania is second only to the Congo in Africa.
>
> Should this be '...mammals and birds. With a bird list...'
>
> Overall very nice design, ideal for the subject matter. Looking forward
to
> seeing the rest
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> Subject: FN-FORUM Simple 3 page site check.
>
>
> Hi guys,
> been out of the scene for a while due to personal probs...divorce etc
> Wondered if anyone could comment on my first site for a while.
> I'ts only small but the client wishes to add a lot more such as a
> wildlife image library at a later stage etc.
>
> The url is http://www.marcbaker-expeditions.com
>
> Regards,
> Gary.
> http://www.moonfizz.com
>