Re: FN-FORUM ADS - site, Nit Picking.

date posted 21st January 2003 23:40

Think this will be a "do as i say and not as i do" case as i have the design
flare of a dead fish on ice. No doubt I'll end up doing the same set of
mistakes but here goes...

As someone else said earlier the "Ads" name in the title makes it sound a
bit fishy - like a free ads / banner ads style service (which is what I
guessed by the comment and interpreted the 'how much would you charge' as a
advert fee). Luckily i was wrong when the site loaded.

The shiny ADS logo doesnt seem to fit in with the rest of the site colour
scheme. Tho colour schemes arent my strong point. "Computer Services" i feel
would be better as the same colour instead of the latter word being dulled
out as if less important.

Main body of text / box titles could do with a more techy font.
Welcome block of text could do with a bit more spacing in and maybe left
aligned. Seems a bit to "blurb" like currently.
The smaller content boxes could do with a slightly larger / clearer font.
The links in the boxes one is lower than the other.

Big red arrow.... doesnt go anywhere. With the text "want to get it sorted"
i expected a link to services page instead of simply directing my attention
to the BSOD.

About page could do with a couple of to break up each section. Might be
me being picky but i like my links to underline at least while mouse is over
them.

Any reason why the link to pricing stratagy is outside the links box?

Ah yes some meta tags in the frameset plus some no frames content. Normally
things I leave to the last minute myself ;)


Hope thats a bit more usefull for you.

-Dave
----- Original Message -----
From: "Nik Whale" [EMAIL REMOVED]
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Sent: Tuesday, January 21, 2003 10:49 PM
Subject: RE: FN-FORUM ADS - site, Nit Picking.


> Please do comment as it is important for me to know, and is that how sites
> are reviewed on here? by criticising other work because of being
critisised
> for your own. Doesnt sound helpful to me?
>
> Anyway thank-you for the 'little' ;) critisism and has been noted.
>
> NiK.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: [EMAIL REMOVED]
> [EMAIL REMOVED] Behalf Of Dave Grey
> Sent: 21 January 2003 22:25
> To: [EMAIL REMOVED]
> Subject: Re: FN-FORUM ADS - site, Nit Picking.
>
>
> The red text on the blue menu is not that easy on the eyes to read, either
> that or I've been in front of the pc to many hours today ;)
>
> I dare not comment more as I myself will be putting my neck out for the
chop
> and asking for feedback on a site I am working on in a few days time.
>
> -Dave
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: Nik Whale
> To: FreelanceForum
> Sent: Tuesday, January 21, 2003 9:37 PM
> Subject: FN-FORUM ADS - site, Nit Picking.
>
>
> Lo peeps,
>
> My first complete web site... www.ads-services.co.uk not much just a basic
> site. but would appreciate any comments on design, code, layout, etc. BUT
> ONLY if you have time, I dont want to be evil eyed for wasting yer time :)
>
> Any comments on how much you would charge a client for this site would
also
> be of benefit.
>
> Thank-you in advance.
>
> NiK..
>
>
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