Re: FN-FORUM: Preliminary site test please

date posted 8th January 2006 11:45

Andy

I am a designer and I dont know if you meant this to be the case but
the text all comes out really big and overruns under you bottom bar -
it also appears as some kind of default font like courier so looks
really basic (not trying to be rude just helpful)
as you say the 1st menu of services doesnt come out correctly and it
looks for the picture of the car that the logo is different from the
one on the van therefore these is inconsistency there
The before and after shots all appear as a vertical line of images
which is a bad use of the screen and in my mind doesnt sell the concept
of before and after as its hard to see what they are apart for pics of
the insude of a car type thing

hope thats some help like I say just trying to help really

good luck
matt

Matthew le Maistre Smith
Creative Director
Design United Digital Ltd.
Tel: +44 (0)20 7193 9134
e-mail: [EMAIL REMOVED]
Web: www.design-united-digital.com

On 8 Jan 2006, at 12:00, Andy Macnaughton-Jones wrote:


Hi,
Quick request for a site test - I'm not a graphic designer - the
background image and colours are already defined as they need to match
with business cards etc. But I think that it doesn't *quite* pull
together cohereantly.

There's some more text content to come on various pages as well as
images for them so it's really just the homogenaity.

Oh, and ignore the valid XHTML thing - that needs removing.

And I know that on non-IE the stuff bleeds under the height. It's more
the graphic design element that needs a fresh eye.

Site is;

http://test.professional-car-valeting.co.uk/

Cheers
Andy

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