Re: FN-FORUM: Site Check!

date posted 11th January 2006 19:26

> Your contact page is really cool. I like the dropdown effect. Enquiry is
> spelt enquiry, not enquirey. I love your writing style. It's very
> personable. I don't even know you, but I like you already. You should kee=
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> that general style but maybe make it slightly more professional for your
> REAL target audience (the people who might be hiring you). Sell the
> real-life benefits that you can offer.

I didnt know i had a "writing style", writing isnt one of my strong
points, i'll try go through and correct my spelling mistakes. One of
the things i was trying to get across is that im an individual and not
a company, so im glad thats how you saw it.

Cheers.